[Novawrimo] That Bright Dawn

[Vyz Ejstu]

"Well, I seem to have made it in the nick of time. Without further ado, here is my Contest Submission. I can only hope you enjoy it as much as I did.


Thank you.
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Novawrimo-ThatBrightDawn.pdf

[Lethys]

Straight forward and no big plot twists - good story, fun to read. +1

[Vyz Ejstu]

Straight forward and no big plot twists - good story, fun to read. +1

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Thank you, Lethys. While reading through it early this morning, I spotted quite a few typos that needed to be dealt with. That's done and all we can do now is to wait with fingers crossed. 

 

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[Anaximander]

Once again, Aetherios drops some mad good read yo.


+1

[Devious_T]

"Well, I seem to have made it in the nick of time. Without further ado, here is my Contest Submission. I can only hope you enjoy it as much as I did.

 

 

Thank you.

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It was certainly action-packed!

 

I liked the whole 'good-guy outlaw' kind of feel you had to the cast; if you have read the Reckoners series by Brandon Sanderson that's the kind of thing I'm talking about.

 

Good luck!

 

DT

[Vyz Ejstu]

Once again, Aetherios drops some mad good read yo.

 

 

+1

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*I tip my hat*

 

Thank you, Captain. I'm glad you enjoyed it that much! 

 

On a side note, you and Chul will probably get along, just fine!

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[Vyz Ejstu]

It was certainly action-packed!

 

I liked the whole 'good-guy outlaw' kind of feel you had to the cast; if you have read the Reckoners series by Brandon Sanderson that's the kind of thing I'm talking about.

 

Good luck!

 

DT

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Thank you, Devious_T! From your comment, it seems I did the job on the characters well. If I ever should do some spin offs about Kaz's brother, I'll be sure to level the playing field between good and bad. More stories should be written about "grey area" characters, I suppose. 

 

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[Vyz Ejstu]

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I'll use this opportunity to say a big thank you to the editor who agreed to work with me on this story. Two pair of eyes are always better than one, Daring!

 

Thank you very much!

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[NQ-Nyzaltar]

Hi there!

 

This fan fiction has now been added to the list here as a participation to the Novawrimo contest.

 

Best regards,

Nyzaltar.

[Vyz Ejstu]

" Splendid! Thank you very much, NQ-Nyzaltar. "

[Anonymous]

Excellent work You continue to be the DU bar I aim for in my writing.

[Arkanos]

I read it and much enjoyed it. You're excellent at incorporating the large, small, and in-between and creating a complete world. Loved it!

[Vyz Ejstu]

Excellent work You continue to be the DU bar I aim for in my writing.

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Why, thank you, Anonymous! I'm very pleased you found it interesting. There are many sites on the net that offer resources and I will suggest Royal Road Legends to you. 

 

It gives more examples of written work than tips on how to write. Thus -- in many cases -- it is up to the reader to judge what made a piece of lore interesting and what made it lacklustre. You'll find hundreds of books written by people from all works of life and I hope to add one of my books in the near future. 

 

Thank you once again, Anonymous, I wish you the best. 

 

Cheers.

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[Vyz Ejstu]

I read it and much enjoyed it. You're excellent at incorporating the large, small, and in-between and creating a complete world. Loved it!

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 Arigatō, tomoyo!

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