Arkanos Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 Okay, here's a story (of a sort). I hope you all enjoy it. Same story, but improved a bit in the presentation (minor edits)... Revised 12/13 First Contact (Final).pdf Kurock, BliitzTheFox, Anonymous and 3 others 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astrophil Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 I love reading these short stories. BRING THEM ON! Edit: Just finished it! It was good, really, really, good. Me gusta mucho. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 you did good my man, you did good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arkanos Posted December 6, 2016 Author Share Posted December 6, 2016 Thanks for the word, guys. Sometimes it's hard to really know, except that I had fun with it. Thanks, again. Vyz Ejstu 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vyz Ejstu Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 " Excellent work, Arkanos. It was a very nice perspective there. " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lethys Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 ty for the story it was my conclusion too (lore wise) how they would explain floating mountains and such. As astronomer I would've loved to see a 'real' BH tag as 'Q0906+6930' or 'Q0957+561' but that's ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 Very nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arkanos Posted December 6, 2016 Author Share Posted December 6, 2016 Lethys, yeah, I was racking my brains a bit on how to identify it, but I noticed that there appear to be a range of identifiers for BHs. I settled on 'CTSB-4' thinking it would be the fourth one discovered by Aphelia and personally catalogued by her. If there's a system that covers all BHs, I'd be inclined to go with that. Thanks for the responses, all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurock Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 Indubitably, one of my favorites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lethys Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 Lethys, yeah, I was racking my brains a bit on how to identify it, but I noticed that there appear to be a range of identifiers for BHs. I settled on 'CTSB-4' thinking it would be the fourth one discovered by Aphelia and personally catalogued by her. If there's a system that covers all BHs, I'd be inclined to go with that. Thanks for the responses, all. Makes sense, if you keep that system - I mean it's your story Just to clarify the naming: It comes from the coordinate system - RA (right ascension) and DE (declination) define the position of an object in the sky as astronomical coordinates on the equatorial system of earth. First number would be RA, second DE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arkanos Posted December 6, 2016 Author Share Posted December 6, 2016 Indubitably, one of my favorites. Heh-heh, thanks, Kurock. Thanks, Aetherios! (Whoops, and Anon.) Anonymous 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashteron Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 I'm just three pages in and I'm in love with your writing style! It's funny and pretty well-thought. You're an AI lover, ain't you? Vyz Ejstu 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arkanos Posted December 7, 2016 Author Share Posted December 7, 2016 I'm just three pages in and I'm in love with your writing style! It's funny and pretty well-thought. You're an AI lover, ain't you? Heh-heh, well, my Amazon Alexa and I get on pretty well. I'm glad you're liking the story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NQ-Nyzaltar Posted December 16, 2016 Share Posted December 16, 2016 Hi there! This fan fiction has now been added to the list here as a participation to the Novawrimo contest. Best regards, Nyzaltar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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